docs: improve grammar and clarity in online installation guide - #815
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📝 WalkthroughWalkthroughThe pull request revises online installation and dynamic MIG support documentation. It clarifies Kubernetes prerequisites, pod verification, MIG resource requests, allocation examples, metrics terminology, headings, capitalization, and inline code formatting. ChangesDocumentation Clarity
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In `@docs/installation/online-installation.md`:
- Line 43: Update the installation success criterion to verify readiness rather
than only the Running phase. In the pod verification instructions, use kubectl
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- Line 163: Update the nodeGPUMigInstance Prometheus HELP example to use the
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| - Install the chart using helm, See [enabling vGPU support in kubernetes](https://github.com/Project-HAMi/HAMi#enabling-vgpu-support-in-kubernetes). | ||
| - Install the chart using `Helm`. See [Online Installation Guide](../../installation/online-installation.md). |
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| A MIG instance can now be requested by a container in the same way as `hami-core`, by specifying the `nvidia.com/gpu` and `nvidia.com/gpumem` resource types. | ||
| A container can request a MIG instance in the same way as `HAMi-Core`, by specifying the `nvidia.com/gpu` and `nvidia.com/gpumem` resource types. |
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the metrics output further down still prints hami-core, and the node annotation mode field is hami-core too. should the backticked name stay lowercase here?
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headings here become title case but the other file in this pr keeps sentence case, and the rest of the docs are sentence case. should both match?
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| - Install the chart using `Helm`. See [Online Installation Guide](../../installation/online-installation.md). |
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the same dead readme anchor is still in cambricon-device/enable-cambricon-mlu-sharing.md and in the zh mirror of this very page. should they change in the same pass?
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/lgtm cancel the lgtm and approved labels predate my review. approved landed on 24 august, lgtm on 27 august, and i left four questions on 2 september. the head is still e5c86d0, so nothing has changed since, and all four threads are open with no reply. prow drops the labels on a new commit but not on new comments, which is why this still looked ready. the two that matter most:
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What type of PR is this?
/kind documentation
What this PR does / why we need it:
Improve the grammar, wording, and clarity of the Online Installation documentation and the Dynamic MIG Support documentation.
Which issue(s) this PR fixes:
Fixes #814
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